Intro
When you think of writing, there are two
distinct genres that separate it down the middle. To many, they are as
different as night and day, blue and red, hot and cold, sweet and sour, the
list goes on. When it comes to writing, you can either write creatively or
academically, poetically or rhetorically. This gap between fiction and
nonfiction has long been thought to be unbridgeable. This construct; a
construct being something that we accept as true due to extensive exposure
within our culture or discipline, but was something agreed upon in the first
place; has been discussed extensively by ( ) who mention (). I say that this gap
is neither as long nor as dark as many people make it out to be. While there
are distinct differences between them, by changing the situations, you can
understand both. To show how this construct works, I will challenge a second
construct that is prevalent in the literary world, on both sides of the issue.
The concept of the stereotype has been around for a long time, in both fiction
and nonfiction. This construct has two faces, as has been the common theme so far
in this paragraph, in that it can be applied to both sides, but from different
angles. For the creative side, there is the idea that to have good writing all
you need are stereotypical characters to make a good story. For the rhetorical
side, there is the concept that an essay must be straightforward and lengthy,
as well as use complex vocabulary. The result of testing this construct on both
sides will then by default test the original construct that we have set out to
prove. Meta much? If so, get ready for the most convoluted set of logic to make
sense that you’ve ever seen.
Synthesis
Literature
and Composition: Separatism or Convergence? By John Trimbur
is a work that supports bridging the gap between the creative and rhetorical.
By showing his stated initial want for them to be separate and realization that
they can work together. Also, Create
Flesh and Blood Characters by William Kowalski illustrates my point of
stereotypes for the fiction side. The article Challenging Stereotypes About Academic Writing: Complexity,
elaboration, Explicitness by Douglas Biber and Bethany Gray shows the
stereotypes found in nonfiction and academic writing and challenges them, thus
proving the point I’m trying to make. I also want to look at Greene’s article
on conversation, but don’t know how it will fit in if at all. The same goes for
Porter’s article on Intertextuality and Elbow’s on Contradictions.
This is a bare bones outline of what I intend to do, but more analysis of the texts is required to know more about what I want to do with what source.
Hi Jack,
ReplyDeleteSorry I'm late in getting to your work. I remember reading this post so I'm not sure why I didn't leave a comment. Anyway, I'm glad we got a chance to have the discussion in my office the other day and I think that really helped you sort out what you're doing. This is presented fairly lucidly and I like how you immediate set up the construct of the rhetoric/poetic split and seek to challenge that. I don't think, however, that you need to bring use the construct language to describe the sterotype/stereotypical ways of thinking about language. You don't want to make it out to be more confusing than it actually is. So while I understand your warning to the reader to "get ready for the most convoluted logic" - I don't know that you really want to make that move if your goal is to help the reader understand your argument.
I really liked the move you made in the first paragraph when you say how the split "has been discussed extensively by ( ) who mention (). " Leaving these slots open for scholars is a great way to go about synthesis/conversation. Of course, I want to see them filled in too. Did you get a chance to read any of the scholarshi[ referenced on the web site I sent you a link to? I think some of that stuff would really be great in here.
Also, about stereotypes of argument, I think you need to look further than length and complex vocabulary, especially if you want to use Porter and Greene. Think about some of the other stereotypes about argument that we've been dealing with and talking about. That arguments are always about winners/losers, for instance, that they always deal with FACTS- either right or wrong, that they are always original, etc. So dig a little deeper here.
This is a pretty good start. I hope it's coming along more by this point. Good work.